There was a girl that was named Ava. Ava was full of excitement. Ava lived in A old shack in a rainforest. On one sunny day ava set out to find something new , as she was walking along the bumpy rocky path she spotted something shining in the distance. ava crept up to the shiny object, as she got closer she could clearly see that it was a shiny silver pot. She ran quietly up to the pot. As she lifted the lid a slight bit, she was disappointed, all it was, was a shiny pot.
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Amelie
5/30/2015 11:20:59 am
Fantastic Liesl! I love how Ava gets all excited when she sees the pot but when she goes up to it, it is only a shiny pot with nothing interesting about it. There is a couple of gramma mistakes but otherwise it was a great piece of writing! I really enjoyed reading your #100wc and keep writing more stories like this.
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