It was very cold and very wet outside but luckily we were inside and it was warm and cozy, but the ferocious wind kept howling on and on, we could barley hear each other speaking to one another over the howling wind, it was so loud! Then suddenly out of nowhere the door bursts open, we all thought that the wind had come in but luckily it was just a snowman made by kids. Luckily the storm had passed and the ferocious wind had gone away and it had left some snow and we played in it for the rest of the day.
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Audrey
5/25/2015 08:09:55 am
That was great! I liked how you said " Then suddenly out of nowhere." That captured my mind a lot. I encourage you to do more!
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Darcy.F
6/3/2015 08:55:33 am
Your story is really interesting and imaginative and the part where you have the problem that you solved it sounded really good!
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