I was doing my homework when my mum came in with some tongue tingling popping candy. She said that I had to drink it all up, but I said" never in one million years would I drink that!" but I knew I had to so I drank it all upend it made my tongue tingle like crazy! Then my mum took the glass and said "thats payback for not doing your homework and drawing instead! " and it was true I had been drawing the whole time (like I do most of the time) she had caught me red handed, again!
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darcy.f
6/4/2015 05:55:22 pm
Your story was cool and the bit about the homework was funny
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erin
6/8/2015 05:50:00 pm
I don`t believe your mum would let you have the popping candy drink but other then that I loved your story, keep it up.
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Penny
6/9/2015 01:24:55 pm
Cool
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india
6/9/2015 09:21:42 pm
omg that story is literally my life!
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Chris
6/14/2015 04:19:26 pm
Hello Molly! I have loved how you have used the expression "she had caught me red handed".I have enjoyed this piece and definitely encourage you to make another one!
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Hettie and emily class4 baschurchprimary
6/29/2015 09:24:23 pm
That was a lovely story and maybe you could use different sentence starters
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