I had waited three weeks for the shop to open. The shop is a lolly shop. The greatest one ever. The reason why it’s so good is that it has the Dongwhuffler. The sweetest, most fantastic, soda fizzing lolly ever. It is like all the best parts of a gazillion lollies mixed into one. I was three minutes away from reaching the counter. I handed over my two dollars. I had a Dongwhuffler in my hand. I put it in my mouth. I expected sweet but it made my tongue tingle. Then suddenly I began to breathe fire. OUCH! HELP!
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adam ti
7/7/2015 07:08:44 pm
Hello from England,
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Elena
7/12/2015 05:55:20 pm
I really like all the adjectives you used and reading it made me hungry. (Or maybe it's just dinnertime) How do you get ideas for your stories? I'm a big fan. Keep writing awesome stories!
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