It was a dark and stormy night when the mad scientist was conducting late night experiments. When suddenly one of his test vials started sizzling, the scientist didn’t know what to do. Until he gained the courage to open it. So as he lifted the lid, a giant monstrosity was released into the local town. The monster was unstoppable until the climate changed to summer and the giant monster disintegrated and the town was free, but the scientist was arrested and life sentenced and his lab was burnt down and all lived happily ever after except the mad, crazy scientist.
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Sylvia
5/31/2015 06:01:09 pm
Well done Alec. I loved your choice of vocabulary.I think you constructed your work really well, just be careful about what punctuation you use and when you use it. Keep up the good work though.
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Mrs Johnson (Team 100)
6/1/2015 07:27:09 am
Hi Alec. I agree with Sylvia - you have chosen some really ambitious vocabulary for your story, well done. It may help to read your work again before publishing it to ensure you are happy with the way your sentences are organised and punctuated.
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