One day Jacob woke up to his phone ringing and when he answered it…, it was his boss shouting that he was late to taste a new flavour of confectionary. So Jacob rushed into the building were his mad boss shoved the lolly into his mouth. Jacob swallowed it and said “I was so nice but it made my tongue tingle.” And so his boss named the lolly the tongue tingler and put it on the global market.
Once upon a time there was a candy taster named Jacob who tasted all different types of confectionary…Even the really weird ones.
One day Jacob woke up to his phone ringing and when he answered it…, it was his boss shouting that he was late to taste a new flavour of confectionary. So Jacob rushed into the building were his mad boss shoved the lolly into his mouth. Jacob swallowed it and said “I was so nice but it made my tongue tingle.” And so his boss named the lolly the tongue tingler and put it on the global market.
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Oskar
6/2/2015 12:35:08 pm
Excellent work Alec. A few sentences that didn't make sence. Still a great story keep up the good work.
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Xander
6/4/2015 07:40:15 am
that was an entertaining piece of writing to read. there were a few mistakes but it was still good
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zola
6/4/2015 07:27:36 pm
It was a good piece of writing but had a few punctuation mistakes
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