Early in the morning Sarah went down to the basement, she saw a creepy clown doll with what appeared to be blood stains, “oh my…” Sarah then heard the footsteps of a killing machine! So she searched for something to defend herself, when the door slammed shut. Happy music started to play, it sounded like Sarah’s old music box. Sarah turned around to see a source of light coming from a box; she placed the box on the ground. As she lifted the lid, a blinding light sent Sarah in a deep sleep, she could hear the laughter of young children, “Goodnight!”
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Rennie
5/26/2015 09:47:07 am
The story sounded like an excuse to write a bunch of creepy things. As far as story's go, it was pretty atmospheric, and you achive a good number of 102 words. Good joob, but in future make the story more fleshed out.
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5/30/2015 08:07:14 pm
As Rennie wrote, pretty atmospheric. You covered sight and sound. I wonder what Sarah smelt or touch?
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