IN A DARK FOREST THERE IS A LITTLE COTTAGE. THE COTTAGE WAS OLD AND NO ONE HAD SEEN IT. A BOY WAS LOST IN THE FOREST. THE THUNDER DESTROYED TREES AND HE FOUND HIMSELF IN A TRAP. THE BOY WAS SCARED. HE CLIMBED OVER THE FALLEN TREE. THE BOY SAW THE COTTAGE. THE BOY WENT INSIDE AND SAW A DEAD PERSON THE STORM WAS GEETTING LOUDER. THERE WAS A BED SO THE BOY CLIMBED ON THE BED. THE WIND WAS MAKING TREES FALL. SUDDNELY! A TREE FELL ON THE COTTAGE. THE BOY WAS STUCK THE WODDEN PLANKS BROKE HIS ARM.
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saffron
5/19/2015 01:15:15 pm
maybe you should try with less CAPS and some coma's but the rest of the story pretty good
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faith
5/21/2015 10:16:59 am
less caps and maybe you should let me read it
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