Her eyes are burning, she doesn’t want to open the lid but she has too because of her inquisitive nature. She goes to the draw and gets a knife and tucks it under the lid. She tries to open it but it’s too hard, it must be stuck. So she decides to get a chainsaw to and tries to open it but it’s no use, she still can’t open it. She decides to get a hammer tries to bash the lid with it but it still won’t open. Finally she tries with her hand and it opens! She lifts the lid and looks inside and sees nothing in the vegemite tub. Absolutely nothing.
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Harrison
5/28/2015 10:43:35 am
good story oskar. like those types of storys keep it oskar
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Mrs Dalkin
6/2/2015 08:18:45 pm
I like the build up in this Oskar, especially as it sounds like the outcome will be really dramatic! It's quite funny too, with the hammer and the chainsaw. Have a little look at your spellings eg 'too' and 'draw'.
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