I tried to run but the ferocious headwind was making it extremely difficult. My arms stung because of the thorny branches that were whipping them and my mouth was dry. My whole body hurt. The funny thing was when I reach the entrance to my house I wanted to turn around and do it again...
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darcy
5/19/2015 08:38:37 pm
very exhilarating!
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nutmeg/megan
5/19/2015 10:48:53 pm
Wow that as amazing you really made me want to read on.
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Xander
5/20/2015 02:27:25 pm
That was a really great piece of writing. There was really exiting descriptions in the writing. There wasn't really anything I could of thought of to improve the writing. Keep it up.
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Imogen
5/20/2015 06:51:25 pm
It is small piece of writing but with so much excitement. I love it.
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Scarlett
5/23/2015 12:58:17 pm
Well done Amelie!
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Amelie
5/24/2015 05:10:01 pm
Thanks everyone!
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