Once a little girl went to find some tomato paste for her mum because she needed it for their dinner. As she lifted the lid, she saw two little cities fighting a war. She tried to yell and stop them but they could not hear her over the shouts and explosions. The girl tried to grab the leaders and discuss peace, but they would not listen. There was no hope. Suddenly she heard a siren and as she looked down at the people she saw a miniature bomber. It dropped an atomic bomb on the city. It destroyed the wall in the centre of them and crumbled the cities. She saw all the mini souls disappear before her eyes. She screamed to her mother.
The war of two worlds.
Once a little girl went to find some tomato paste for her mum because she needed it for their dinner. As she lifted the lid, she saw two little cities fighting a war. She tried to yell and stop them but they could not hear her over the shouts and explosions. The girl tried to grab the leaders and discuss peace, but they would not listen. There was no hope. Suddenly she heard a siren and as she looked down at the people she saw a miniature bomber. It dropped an atomic bomb on the city. It destroyed the wall in the centre of them and crumbled the cities. She saw all the mini souls disappear before her eyes. She screamed to her mother.
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Mrs. Vreeland @ Team 100 NJ USA
5/31/2015 11:31:26 pm
This is a very creative response to the prompt Liam. It reminds me of Gulliver's Travels or Night at the Museum. I have so many questions. Did she know the town was there? Was the battle happening in the can of paste or in the cupboard? I a great author can make a reader forget that they are reading words on paper on focus on the story itself. You did that in spades. Great job!!
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