This week I was determined to make the special showcase so I decided to write another story, although the topic was really hard and I was struggling to make a good story. So instead of writing a story, I decided to write a small passage about nothing. The only real difficulty would be using this weeks topic; But it made my tongue tingle. I really hope you find this passage creative and not boring. I just thought that the rules hadn't stated anything about it having to be a story, so I was like, Why not? Thank you for reading.
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Sylvia
6/8/2015 06:45:45 pm
Well done Jack! Your idea was very clever. Just be carful of capital letters where they're not supposed to be. Besides that though, keep the great work up!:)
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Mia B
6/9/2015 04:58:38 pm
I love the story (well it wasn't a story), keep up the great work
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askia.vandenberg
6/9/2015 05:19:16 pm
well done I thought the test had very good vocabulary good gob !
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red
6/10/2015 04:31:46 pm
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha h ah ha ha h ah ha h ah ah ah a ha ha ha ha. great concept i like the way you made it by doing exetly what you are told
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