As I slowly placed the sour, disgusting, artificial sweet in my mouth, it made my tongue tingle! I quickly spat it it out. My mouth was burning as if I had drunk a poisonous, deadly acid! My tongue shrivelled up and I drooled, most likely resembling a starving dog. Why did I eat that atrocious lolly? Why?
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Jack
6/3/2015 06:13:18 pm
Good use of adverbs
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Mia loves this story
6/9/2015 05:02:55 pm
I love this story especially the adverbs and the adjectives
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Tia - Hawaii
8/6/2015 01:52:56 pm
Hey Tia! I love your work! Ive read so much!
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